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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #210 on: August 30, 2014, 09:44:10 AM »
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Proverbs 22:7, "The rich rule over the poor, and the borrower is slave of the lender"

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #211 on: September 04, 2014, 10:09:31 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #212 on: September 07, 2014, 03:00:25 PM »
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Proverbs 22:7, "The rich rule over the poor, and the borrower is slave of the lender"

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #213 on: September 10, 2014, 07:38:12 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #214 on: September 12, 2014, 02:25:07 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #215 on: September 12, 2014, 04:29:27 AM »
2.6K --- African Firestorm

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #216 on: September 12, 2014, 04:58:17 PM »
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Proverbs 22:7, "The rich rule over the poor, and the borrower is slave of the lender"

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #217 on: September 13, 2014, 12:04:22 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #218 on: September 16, 2014, 03:56:45 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #219 on: September 16, 2014, 05:15:45 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #220 on: September 17, 2014, 05:13:16 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #221 on: September 18, 2014, 01:44:34 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #222 on: September 18, 2014, 01:04:19 PM »
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Proverbs 22:7, "The rich rule over the poor, and the borrower is slave of the lender"

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #223 on: September 19, 2014, 06:19:37 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #224 on: September 19, 2014, 08:45:37 PM »
Wow, look at these numbers being posted! Super great.

I've completed the short story in rough draft. Now I'm back in the final copy edit stage on Book I. After that, I get to dig into Book II.

The exciting news is that the cover art is complete but not yet public. And the title page says, "Book I of the Kami Files" with the title under that. I take that to be a good sign that they anticipate a book II being purchased after my many months working on bringing MS up to snuff for submission.

Please take a look at my new thread I set up. I especially would like DK's opinion, because I think he's the most knowledgeable person I know on Amazon stats etc.

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