Here's my question...
WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO BOB?!?!
No, no, I don't mean the ghost-Bob vs. skull-Bob. I have no problems whatsoever with the ghost-Bob. My problem is that there was no smart-ass, hardly any snark, and zero perversion! He never ONCE mentioned that the kid's mom could be hot! Bob is great for exposition, but if you don't use him as comic relief as well then he just turns into Giles-in-a-skull.
It also seemed like the humor was turned way, way down too. I mean almost non-existent turned down. You said you're basing off The Rockford Files and Spenser for Hire...I'm a huge fan of the Spenser novels and I was a bit too young for the show when it was on, but what episodes I've seen suggest that they didn't lose nearly as much of the smart-assedness of Spenser as we've lost of Harry. The humor of the books is one of my favorite things about it, being a smart-ass-in-training. I don't expect "POLKA WILL NEVER DIE!!" or frozen turkeys falling from the sky...okay, I actually want the frozen turkey from the sky complete with timer popping out because that's just too good to NOT use and the reaction from the characters in the book was sincere...but I do want some more humor. I'm not saying turn it into Buffy with pop-culture references and everyone coming up with perfect jokes on every word, but it'd be nice to have Harry trade barbs a bit more often.
Those are my only real concerns (aside from the typical problems with it not being the REAL pilot so we were left in the dark about some things, but that's not controllable really) about the show long-term. It doesn't feel Spenser for Hire meets Buffy like the books, but more CSI meets X-Files. Isn't there someway to meet somewhere in the middle?
If you need to convince the suits of this...site the success they're having with shows like Monk and Psych on USA. The comedy drives the story as much as the mystery and, while taking it that far would definitely be too much, it might convince them to allow more leeway with the jokes for the next season...
The Abstruse One
Darryl Mott Jr.