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Offline belial.1980

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For my story I'm using a pretty "soft" magic system. Basically I'm taking the old school notion that magic is the manipulation of spiritual entities. I believe Harry Dresden would call it something like, "two-bit sorcery." But, in my world, that is how practically all magic works. (Still toying with the idea of alchemy, but need to look into it more)

So...basically you can't "point and click" to do something magical. For example, let's say you wanted to burn down a warehouse full of your enemies. There is no whispering of an archaic phrase to spew a fireball. What you'd need to do is summon an entity of some sort that's capable of manipulating fire (it could breathe fire, or maybe it's a living construct of flame, the possibilities are limitless) and coerce into starting the conflagration. One can compel a spirit or demon to do something through intimidation, cajoling, flattery, or spinning a deal. (I'll scratch your back, you scratch mine.) It all depends on who's involved and what's at stake.

Spiritual entities run pretty much the whole gamut of the imagination. Some entities are very human, some show intelligence more like insects or animals, and others are more like forces of nature with no real desires or feelings. 

To do magic, you reach between the veil of the real world and the nether world, contact and summon one or more such entities then compel them to follow your orders. How does one accomplish this? Every human being has the basic equipment needed for magic: the soul.

For an analogy, imagine your soul as a blazing firebrand that you can use to lure and hypnotize a beast from the woods. Said beast is drawn towards the fire, but also afraid of it, thus you can keep the creature at bay, command it by prodding it with the fire, and (hopefully) keep it from trying to defy you and destroy you. If properly directed, a human being can use their soul to "burn" a supernatural entity and cause it pain, in the same way they could use a firebrand to burn a flesh and blood wild animal. (Think Belowulf vs Grendel)

In the early days, human beings learned to do magic as part our natural development, just as we learned to use fire or make arrow points. Any archeologist can tell you that most ancient cultures harbored a widespread believe in the spirit world, and many had go-betweens, usually in the form of shamans. They were the first sorcerers. Every culture in the world has their own way of doing magic, with their own trappings, but in the end it comes down to mastering one's mental focus and controlling otherworld beings.

As a side note ::anybody:: can learn magic. Children sometimes do magic without even knowing about it. Horrific visions of the boogey man or child disappearances can sometimes be chalked up to a kid with a vivid imagination and strong will accidentally contacting something from beyond. Of course this "accidental magic" isn't always bad. Roger Woodward was a 7 year old boy who survived after falling over Niagara Falls with nothing to protect him but a life preserver. (Not making this up http://www.infoniagara.com/other/history/roger.html) Maybe there was a little bit of magic involved there…However, as we grow and lose that child-like sense of wonder and fear, the likelihood of accomplishing these magical feats diminishes.

My MC is a 17-year old kid, just learning magic. I'll give 2 quick examples of the magic he weaves to show you the feel I'm going for:

With one spell he summons an invisible demon spirit that makes him invisible as well, to hide from some bullies. The experience is terrifying, and while invisible he's aware of winter-cold claws gripping him, and feels like a dove caught in a predator's jaws. He doesn’t quite know what he's getting into, and once the spell is over, the demon claims its payment for services rendered. It stalks down one of the bullies and attacks him by wracking him with seizures that put him in the hospital for 3 days and leave the young man with a permanent facial twitch. Consequently everybody thinks it was a natural sickness. (Trying to embrace the old school notion that sickness could be brought on by demonic influence.)

For another spell, the MC tries to construct an oracle to keep tabs on some baddies. He sharpens a stick at both ends (ala Lord of the Flies) and mounts a pig head upon it that he bought from the market in the Little Mexico suburb. After many hours of trying to contact the spirit world, it finally comes to life when some entities speak through it. The decapitated head whispers strange things to him then lets out a horrific shriek and bursts into flame.

The MC is terrified and has no idea what this means. He considers the spell a failure until much later when he sees that the oracle was giving him clues, just not the ones he'd been looking for at the time.

Anyway…sorry for the longwinded explanation. I'm trying to present magic as something mysterious and dangerous. I just wanted to see what people had any opinions or suggestions they'd like to share. Thanks in advance!
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Try the voudon religion as a source, your system sounds very similar to some of the more arcane practices.
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I kinda like this system. I dub yee system, Fullmetal Summoner.

This system will work if you keep it consistent. There is only one concern I have about your system: The Spiritual Economy.

This system relates itself to the idea in Shinto that there is a spirit in everything. The questions you need to answer are thus:

1. How often can a Fullmetal Summoner summon a spirit?

2. When you have 2 summoners in the same place at the same time summoning the same spirit, who does the spirit listen to?

3. Have Summoners in your world made a sort of Mystical currency for summoning or do they play it by ear all the time?

4. Going with the Shinto analogy, are there a finite or infinite number of spirits in a given area?..
Let me rephrase, are there restrictions for summoning spirits in an area?
For example, could you summon a spirit of fire in the middle of an arctic tundra without even two sticks to rub together?
Do the spirits need a link to the real world to be summoned or can you just pull out the Spirit Yellow Pages and summon whatever wherever and whenever you need it?

That's all I got for now. I hope Fullmetal Summoner pans out.
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I kinda like this system. I dub yee system, Fullmetal Summoner.

This system relates itself to the idea in Shinto that there is a spirit in everything. The questions you need to answer are thus:

1. How often can a Fullmetal Summoner summon a spirit?

2. When you have 2 summoners in the same place at the same time summoning the same spirit, who does the spirit listen to?

3. Have Summoners in your world made a sort of Mystical currency for summoning or do they play it by ear all the time?

4. Going with the Shinto analogy, are there a finite or infinite number of spirits in a given area?..
Let me rephrase, are there restrictions for summoning spirits in an area?
For example, could you summon a spirit of fire in the middle of an arctic tundra without even two sticks to rub together?
Do the spirits need a link to the real world to be summoned or can you just pull out the Spirit Yellow Pages and summon whatever wherever and whenever you need it?

That's all I got for now. I hope Fullmetal Summoner pans out.

So this train wreck of mine has a name! Thank you. I'm honored.  :)

To set about answering your questions:

A catch all answer would be "it depends." lol. I'm trying to treat magic as an art, rather than a science.

1) Summoning is difficult. I don't want to set a maxim, but it's not something taken lightly. I think the more important question would be, "how often are you willing to risk losing life, limb, and possibly your soul?" A person can try to summon a spirit as often as they want, but the process is physically and mentally taxing. Liken it to taking the MCAT, knowing that if you don't score high enough you could die (or worse.) How often can a person put themselves through that? If you spend hours on end mentally focusing yourself to achieve this sort of thing, it's going to run out your battery. Some people are stronger than others, and some sorcerers have trained themselves to become more efficient.

2) The spirit will usually listen to whoever's got a stronger force of will. Of course, a blood sacrifice can be made to help one's cause. (My MC's demon familiar/sidekick/lover interest explains that when anything dies, it screams, on a spiritual level. This "scream" is used to fuel a summoning and entice something from the other side.)

I think it's unlikely that two people would try to summon the same spirit. There're countless demons and spirits in the netherworld, so I don't think two people would often try to summon the same one. Even if they did, physical location would be irrelevant, since they're trying to call it into the world.

Your comparison to Shinto is a good one, but it doesn't take into account the idea that summoning involves breaking ::through:: the veil that hangs between earth and the netherworld. However, small spiritual essences can come across into our world, and do frequently. Think of minnows slipping in and out of a fishing net. These account for ever-present spirit essences alive in the world. To achieve magical effect, you're usually going to need to invite something stronger into our world.

As I write this, I've been considering and now I think that certain stronger entities should exist in the physical world. Nature entities especially, tied to forests, mountains, ocean, etc.

3) Sorcerers can use rituals, and chants and magic words, but there're no hard-set rules. It's like sex. What works for some people doesn’t always work for others. Blood sacrifices are often helpful. A group of people can pool their will to work towards a common goal.

4) There would definitely be a finite number of spirits in any given area, and more often than not, they're not strong enough to really be of any use to a sorcerer. Thus the sorcerer would need to summon it into the physical world from the nether realm.
 
In my universe, a netherworld exists. My main character's demon familiar calls it "The Dark Place." In essence, it's hell. But there is no Satan, no angel rebellion. It's a dark, frigid place that serves as a dark mirror to our own world. Spirits, demons, and shades dwell down there.

They can come across of their own accord sometimes, but as a rule, the stronger something is, the more difficulty it has remaining in our world. The MC's demon familiar likens it to walking across thin ice. Once something comes across it inevitably "falls" back down to its home. This can be mitigated by forming a pact with a sorcerer. The covenant serves as a lifeline for the entity. Demons are usually the most willing candidates because they have human drives and desires, whereas some other entities are just so alien, it's hard to reach any kind of understanding with them. Once this link is formed, the demon or entity can remain in the world until the stipulations of the pact are fulfilled. Some sorcerers form lifelong pacts.

To answer your question, you could certainly summon some kind of entity to make a fire in the frozen tundra, but again, you must ask yourself "is this worth it?" Can I control the thing that I bring into this world, and for how long? Will I freeze to death if I don't? My characters will have to universally recognize that it's always easier, safer, and more efficient to use mundane methods to achieve their goals.

In regard to the "spiritual yellow pages," I see summoning as a bit like fishing or hunting. You may have a very specific idea of what you're trying to angle, or shoot, but there's always a risk that something else might show up. As a real-life example, my uncle once got chased up a tree by a bear when he was deer hunting.

I'm still working on the idea, and this "system" (I use the word loosely) is purposely a bit nebulous. I don't want to set too many limitations, or create something that's methodical. I want to keep a mystique about it, and I want magic to be strange and a bit frightening, even to those well-versed in its use.

At the same time I don't want the MC to pull some ridiculous magic spell out of his @ss at the last second and save the day. I recognize the danger in that, and have decided that dramatic conflict in my stories should be resolved through human endeavor rather than some all-powerful magic spell.

Thanks to everybody that's offered advice so far!






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You magic system is intriguing because it, from my understanding at least, dismisses the scholarly aspect that many magic systems get bogged down in. No rote memorization, no magic words, no gray-haired old men hoarding knowledge. Your system is chaotic and dangerous.
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You magic system is intriguing because it, from my understanding at least, dismisses the scholarly aspect that many magic systems get bogged down in. No rote memorization, no magic words, no gray-haired old men hoarding knowledge. Your system is chaotic and dangerous.

I try not to totally dismiss the scholarly aspect. In fact, one of the most effective spells my MC casts is a very formal ritual of medieval tradition. He works a spell taken almost verbatim from the medieval text, Liber De Angelis (Book of Angels) I found it in a book called Conjuring Spirits, Texts and Traditions of Ritual Magic. (http://www.amazon.com/Conjuring-Spirits-Traditions-Medieval-Ritual/dp/0271025174/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1240204100&sr=8-1) It contains translations of actual magical texts from the middle ages. Interesting stuff.

I guess what I'm getting at is that the shaman with the face paint and wolf skull fetish, and the gray beard, with his arcane tomes, have equally valid methods. Do what works...ends to a means.

 


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You magic system is intriguing because it, from my understanding at least, dismisses the scholarly aspect that many magic systems get bogged down in. No rote memorization, no magic words, no gray-haired old men hoarding knowledge. Your system is chaotic and dangerous.

But those with more experience will have more contracts, contacts, and confidence.  A lifetime of favors accumulated.
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The idea of the system is interesting and one I have found used in similar fashion to the spirit magics of the old White Wolf games, especially Werewolf: the Apocalypse. They used a cool old word, Chiminage to sum up the act of getting a spirit to bend to your will. Different groups went about this in different ways, usually either through kissing spirit butt and flattering them into action, bribing them with favors and idolatry, or forcing the spirit into action by sheer force (dangerous in that setting due to the hierarchy of spirits and insulting a more powerful spirit by harming their underling).

Chim´i`nage
n. 1. (Old Law) A toll for passage through a forest.

Then there is Mage: the Ascension... both games have really good resources to dig through for idea, plus their reading lists are good for researching such things.

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Chim´i`nage
n. 1. (Old Law) A toll for passage through a forest.


Awesome. Thanks! I'll see about scaring up some of those books for reference.
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I've done some more thinking on this "system" of magic. (I use the word "system" loosely.) It seems to me that the trend in fantasy is to treat magic much like one would treat a form of science. I want it to treat it as something more akin to an art form. I want it to be a bit dangerous and unpredictable, and I wanted to find a way to reconcile the shaman, the druid, the magician, etc. and synthesize most forms of historical magic.

As stated earlier, magic is the act of compelling entities such as demons, spirits and ghosts, and such, to follow the sorcerer's will. I got to thinking, "how exactly does this work?" Symbolism. When someone says to their girlfriend, "I love you honey" they're not literally comparing her to the byproduct of small, flying insects. They're ascribing her with a favorable quality of said substance—sweetness. Waving goodbye, blowing a kiss, shaking hands—these are all symbolic gestures that connotative of something deeper. Most human communication involves symbolism on some level, so why would communication with the spirit world be any different?

This is where sympathetic magic and rituals come into play. Symbols are set and coordinated through ritual magic to compel entities to follow the sorcerer's will. Words, gestures, sacrifices, etc. are all symbols to communicate the sorcerer's will. The forms of these symbols are limited only to the sorcerer's imagination, and as long as they construe the sorcerer's meaning, there's no reason why they shouldn't work. Thus the greybeards with their lengthy moonlit rituals, the cave dwelling shaman with their animal masks and fire lit dances, and the modern day sorceress with a summoning circle in her basement are all using the same method. The art in magic comes from constructing effective symbols that properly direct the entities the mage is attempting to compel.
   
So, then I got to thinking, "Okay. That's a working concept. It's a bit vague at this point in the game. How would this apply to an actual spell?"

It's back to applied symbolism. Let's say, for argument's sake, that a medieval sorcerer has turned the dusty pages of his grimoire to a ritual is designed to call the demon Asmodeus, up from The Nethers and compel him to destroy his enemies with fire.

Asmodeus is not actually a single demon or entity. Asmodeus is a symbolic being, like a character in a play. This particular spell calls for a powerful devil to destroy the sorcerer's enemies with fire. When the sorcerer crafts said spell, he creates a script of symbolic language for 'Asmodeus' to follow. If successful, he'll succeed in calling a devil with the powers and resources that fit the bill for Asmodeus. (Again, like an actor called to fill the part. Just as Jim Carey couldn't pull off the role of Vito Corleone, Marlon Brando wouldn't have made a very good choice for Ace Ventura) The summoned devil assumes the role of Asmodeus and steals upon the sorcerer's enemies to smite them with flame. Whether the demon breathes fire, or wields a flaming cutlass, or calls tongues of fire to fall upon them really makes no difference, since the end result is the same. The role has been filled successfully.
   
The spell, like a play, is subject to improvisation, miscues, prima donnas, etc. A poorly crafted spell may end with "Asmodeus" deciding the story should end with him incinerating the sorcerer that summoned him.

Eh, the concept is still pretty rough, with lots of holes to fill, but I'm pretty sure this is the direction I want to take it.
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Wow.  I really like your system.  Very unique in the applications and limitations.  You can do a lot with that.

Question, though - you said maybe stronger spirits would have a harder time staying over, but in another post nature spirits and other very strong ones would be almost native to our realm.  Should something be reconciled there?  Like maybe the spirit made a pact with the land itself in order to stay?  That way it would be region specific and would account for different cultures and their different mythologies.  Just a thought.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to do something that emphaizes the strange and eerie possibilities of magic. The system's still very much WIP. I'm kind of nipping and tucking as I got along, so to say.

Since those earlier posts I've come up with the idea of "Elder Spirits." I think it comes pretty close to what you're suggesting.

Nobody knows for sure where Elder Spirits came from, but it's pretty certain they were here long before human beings. They're native to earth (though some contend they originally came from another realm altogether, though this cannot be proven nor disproven). Either way they're here to stay and don't have to worry about eventually transgressing back to the nether realm, like demons.

Elder Spirits often account for the nature entities from Native Amercian folklore, kami from Shinto belief, as well beings from countless other spiritual traditions around the world. They range from insect or animal-like intelligence to elemental beings that follow only base, primal drives, to incredibly intelligent beings. The strongest were often worshipped in the earlier days. A forest or volcano god might've been one of these ancient spirits. Also, haunted or sacred places might be the domain of a strong Elder Spirit.

I think this sort of ties in with your idea of a pact with a land, except that they belong here, unlike a demon. Their motivations are often beyond mortal comprehension, but a skilled sorcerer can still summon, compel, or commune with them.




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You might possibly want to have a look at Daniel Abraham's Long Price quartet; it's not exactly like what you describe, but it's in a similar direction, and they are very good books so it would not be time wasted anyway.
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Cool. Thanks. Checked it out on Amazon. Looks good. Will prob pick up a copy once I'm done reading The Dark Tower series.
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