Author Topic: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?  (Read 5349 times)

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Re: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?
« Reply #15 on: May 23, 2012, 02:09:06 PM »
Well it takes place in Cincinnati. I've linked a crime-scene to the casino and my mc is heading there to see how far the corruption goes, but it ends up being a trap. Pivotal moment in the novel. Lot's of damage, lot's of death, and a good friend is taken. I don't necessarily need the "getting past security scene" if it's not relevant.

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Re: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?
« Reply #16 on: May 23, 2012, 02:12:43 PM »
You can always say they have added security in place for some special event.  Some big concert or convention maybe?
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Re: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?
« Reply #17 on: May 23, 2012, 02:15:14 PM »
Thanks. That works, it gives more reason for the mc to believe the casino heads were in on what was going down as well, with an excuse for added security.

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Re: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?
« Reply #18 on: May 23, 2012, 09:34:52 PM »
Or you could have the MC worry about the security but when he gets there there's nothing. A false conflict kind of thing. But the most you'll get stopped for going into a casino is if someone wants to check your id.

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Re: Did Jim nab the market on quoting Lucas?
« Reply #19 on: May 23, 2012, 10:45:03 PM »
Thanks for the insight, I'll have to make some changes. I figured there would at least be some kind of metal-detectors though. /shrug