Character Creation Help - Lesser Dragon

[Deadmanwalking]

Skills:

Fantastic: Athletics, Weapons
Superb: Discipline, Endurance, Presence,
Great: Alertness, Intimidation, Scholarship,
Good: Conviction, Lore, Rapport,
Fair: Craftsmanship, Fists, Guns, Might,
Average: Burglary, Investigation, Stealth, Survival,

Stunts:

Riposte (Weapons)

Powers:

Glamours [-2]
Supernatural Strength [-4]
Supernatural Speed [-4]
Supernatural Toughness [-4]
The Catch is Cold Iron and the like [+3]

Feeding Restriction (Rage) [+1] effecting;
Supernatural Recovery [-4]

Item of Power (Sword of War) [+2]
True Strike [-1]
Incite Emotion (Rage; At Range, Lasting Emotion) [-3]

Total: -17 Refresh

Stress:

Mental: OOOO
Physical: OOOO(OOOO) (+1 Mild Consequence)
Social: OOOO
Armor: 2 more with worn armor.

Note: His Sword is Weapon: 3.

[Tbora]

I made a mistake as per my EDIT to my previous post, have him as a Lord of Warfare, Battle, and Violence not a master of the Hunt.

And as a Lord of Sidhe, shouldn't he have Greater Glamours?

[Deadmanwalking]

Edited to be, well, what was requested.

And full Lords of the Fae might have Greater Glamours but it doesn't seem like it should be required for middle management in areas that are far removed from Creation, which War certainly is.

[Tbora]

Cool thanks, much appreciated, the only two character concepts I have left for this refresh level is a True Shapeshifter, and a mage tha specializes in healing,mind, and illusion magics....

BTW if he were a lord of Good Fortune, Crops, and Wealth how would you change him?

[Deadmanwalking]

Cool thanks, much appreciated, the only two character concepts I have left for this refresh level is a True Shapeshifter, and a mage tha specializes in healing,mind, and illusion magics....

The True Shapeshifter's easy, power-wise. The otheris interesting, but doable.

BTW if he were a lord of Good Fortune, Crops, and Wealth how would you change him?

His skills would be completely different, to start with. He'd have Greater Glamours and Sponsored Magic, but only Inhuman level Strength and Speed. He might well have an Item of Power, but it would do something entirely different (maybe provide the Sponsored Magic). He might also have The Sight and Sulgaze and maybe a few Mortal Stunts for Resources.

[Tbora]

So will you help me do my support mage?

[Deadmanwalking]

If you like.  

Skills:

Fantastic: Discipline, Lore,
Superb: Conviction, Empathy, Scholarship,
Great: Athletics, Deceit, Rapport
Good: Contacs, Endurance, Presence,
Fair: Alertness, Fists, Guns, Investigation,
Average: Burglary, Driving, Resources, Stealth,

Powers:

Evocation [-3]
Thaumaturgy [-3]
The Sight [-1]
Soulgaze [-0]
Seelie Magic* [-2]
Refinement [-8]

Total: -17 Refresh

Specializations:

Evocation (Air, Water, Spirit); Power (Spirit +3, Water +1), Control (Spirit +2)
Thaumaturgy; Control (Biomancy +3), Complexity (Biomancy +1, Psychomancy +2),

Focus Items:

Veil Amulet (+2 Defensive Power and Control with Spirit for Greater Veil only.)
Biomancy Bracelet (+3 Biomancy Power)

Enchanted Items:

Reinforced Outfit (10 shift Block or Armor 5, five times per session) [8 Enchanted Item Slots]

Stress:

Mental: OOOO (+1 Mild Consequence)
Physical: OOOO
Social: OOOO
Armor: 0 more with magic or items.

*Or some other Sponsored Magic, ideally one that allows Biomancy at Evocation speeds, but whatever you like.

[Tbora]

Awesomeness, with Fantastic Lore, the character gets 6 rotes.

Could you help me put them together please Deadman?

I would like a couple of Healing Spells one that can do a whole lot good and one that just takes care of relatively minor damage.

Next I need a minor Veil (like Harry's Notice Me Not effect he had on his hideout in Turn Coat) and a more powerful Greater Veil that she casts it and she dissapears.Period., and a weapon grade combat spell that she can defend herself with that works thematically.(Maybe a sleep spell or some such?)And to top it off, a shield for when she is unable to hide and needs to wait out an onslaught till her heavy hitting ally's arrive.

[Deadmanwalking]

Note: Modified the character slightly so this works.

Rotes:

Don't Notice Me (6 shift Veil that doesn't give Perception penalties.)
Greater Veil (8 shift Veil, that doesn't give Perception penalties. Requires Veil Amulet.)
My Life For Yours (8 shift Reiki Healing Spell, requires Biomancy Bracelet.)
Choke Out* (Weapon: 8 attack.)
Illusion Effects (8 shift Maneuver, places two sticky Aspects on a Scene or individual.)
Force Shielding (8 shift block or Armor 4, often extended the next turn.)

Other Effects:

Healing Touch (Replaces a 5 shift Scholarship roll to provide First Aid.) Casually controllable.


*A properly administered blood-choke (which is to say one that cuts off blood flow, not air flow, to the brain) will knock someone out in less than ten seconds and have no meaningful chance of killing them or otherwise inflicting permanent harm. It does require a precise understanding of how to do it, but this character is a Biomancer. This Rote does it telekinetically. It's the Special Forces version of a Force Choke.