In getting some of the reviews back, I obviously didn't spend enough time or money with editors. It's tough having the limited resources of an indi. I am glad, however, that with the e-reader (and even print-on-demand) formats that typographical errors aren't permanent and can be fixed as quickly as they are found. Some errors are harder to fix once the story is sent out. As mentioned earlier, the ease of fixing errors can also create problems, since new mistakes can be added just as easily. Hopefully I've gotten most of these errors now, but please let me know if you see anything that glares at you. I love improving even if it is sometimes somewhat painful finding out how much I have to go.