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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #30 on: June 23, 2011, 06:59:38 PM »
I'm afraid that link seems to be kaput.  Do you have another link to the same material?

No, but it's working fine for me now.
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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #31 on: June 23, 2011, 07:01:08 PM »
Shiney.  I'll try it again later tonight.

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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #32 on: June 24, 2011, 01:18:57 AM »
Works now.  That blog has about 31 flavors of awesome.  The perverse thing is I didn't really need to shift mental gears to understand it.  Don't know if that says something bad about my brain, or something good about the writer.  Probably both.

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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #33 on: June 24, 2011, 05:48:42 AM »
Love the new sig, Paynes!
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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #34 on: June 24, 2011, 06:09:00 AM »
I'm coming into this late but I have to tag in so I can keep up with this thread. I never had much trouble with Dumas but I admit that Victor Hugo had me gnashing my teeth at times in Les Miserables when he would, for instance, spend multiple chapters describing exactly what a "guttersnipe" is only to say that the boy the story was about was not a true guttersnipe because his heart was "absolutely gloomy and void." He gave a long and detailed description of the Battle of Waterloo only to introduce a character wandering on the battlefield after the battle was over. I guess when you're paid by the word you do what is necessary to maximise your earnings.
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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #35 on: June 25, 2011, 03:52:45 PM »
Which reminds me of one of the best negative reviews of all time:

The corpse of many a hero slain
Decked Waterloo's ensanguined plain
Yet none by salvo or by shot
Fell half so flat as Walter Scott.
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Re: When is wordy just too wordy?
« Reply #36 on: June 26, 2011, 03:48:24 AM »
I have a wonderful book called Rotten Reviews - about bad reviews given to authors who later made it good with the book
that was reviewed.