O.k.,
, I was gone for most of the past two days and couldn't check the message board, but as far as advice goes thanks to everybody! Moritz, thanks for the advice, and yes, I do say "lol" to much. But, in all actuality I am actually laughing/smiling/find it humorous when I put that. If it annoys you, I'm sorry for that, but otherwise your advice was great.
Wolfhowls, thanks for the defense. .....
Meg_evonne, don't let stuff like that get ya down, in the grand scheme of things, you will have forgotten it by this time next week
And finally, Franzeska, Thanks for your advice. I am trying to bridge a gap that is put there by trying to write a novel like this. Maybe I can hit a good sweet spot as far as publishers go. Maybe I'll get lucky. You never know, if I'm writing for the Lord, I might get some kickbacks.
Everybody have a great day!