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Author Craft / Re: Final Hope - Book 3 of the Locked Within Trilogy
« on: November 05, 2013, 02:19:39 PM »
Congrats! Is it more or less pressure, having a contract? ;D

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Display Case / Re: Perfect Casting, part 2
« on: April 11, 2013, 12:10:36 PM »
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IAN SOMERHALDER FOR THOMAS!



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Author Craft / Re: Help. Thoughts?
« on: April 11, 2013, 11:15:01 AM »
Honestly, I can't say. I don't read YA. It might be common to the genre, and if it is then you're golden. So I'd say scout out other YA books, especially mysteries, and see how heavy the genre tends to be in dialogue. You might even want to rely on numbers and not your eye for things, since we tend to be poor judges of some of that stuff. ;) Get a good sampling of the number of lines of dialogue. 10 lines of dialogue in 100 lines or something. Then do the same for your manuscript. That should give you a fairly accurate idea of where you are, despite being a kind of boring exercise.

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Author Craft / Re: "Borrowing" Ideas...
« on: March 28, 2013, 01:02:39 PM »
For that matter, I'm working on a very similar concept: technology, for X reason, abruptly doesn't work. Now what?  And yeah, when Revolution came out, I thought "Oh well, time to toss this one in the trash." The thing is, though, given the same exact starting point, the writers of Revolution and I went in radically different directions. We're not even sort of telling the same story, despite the same starting point.

I recently saw somewhere -- and I want to say it was on Chuck Wendig's Terrible Minds blog 'cause he's big with the pithy writing advice except there wasn't nearly enough profanity in it for it to have come from Wendig -- a bit of advice that went something like, "It doesn't matter if someone else had the same story idea you had. Tell yourself that you can do it better." That's what I'm doing. I like my idea, my interpretation, way better. I do like Revolution, but the more I watch it, the more dissatisfied I get if only because I keep thinking, "Man, there were SO MANY better ways y'all could've gone with the basic idea." 

Besides, their interpretation is informed by their details, most importantly the detail of what made tech stop working. Just as with your notion, my version of what made tech stop working necessarily takes my story in a wildly different direction. The inciting incident in Revolution is a key story point. The weapons research, the amulets, are all the focus for the show: who has them, who wants them, what they'll do to get them/keep them. That's simply not the case in my story. What happened and why is incidental. To meme things up a bit, ain't nobody got time fo' dat in my world.

So write it. I've got $20 in my pocket right now that says even if you had quite literally the EXACT same starting point, amulets and all, you'd be writing a completely different story. And odds are very good you'll like your story better. So write it. There's an audience out there who'll like it better, too.

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Author Craft / Re: finding inspiration through music
« on: March 28, 2013, 12:47:17 PM »
I'm almost incapable of writing without music, especially when I first sit down to start for the day. It's like I need the ... I dunno, the distraction? I need something to put one part of my mind on so it'll get out of my way and I can start writing. I swear I don't have ADD because that need doesn't show up in any other part of my life, but unless I have music to divide my attention, I can't settle in to write. It's like part of my brain is a little kid. "Here, listen to this while Mommy works."

Once I get started, and especially if I fall into the hole, it becomes less important. But starting out for the day? Yeah. I need it.

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Author Craft / Re: So this whole Kindle Serials thing...
« on: October 27, 2012, 01:07:35 PM »
My problem would be that about 40,000 words in, I'd suddenly think up a cool ending that would require me to go back and change or add stuff to the beginning parts.  That happens to me all the time in my pantser method of writing.  My way, it's no big deal. I just make a note and fix things when I edit. But when they're already out there, there's nothing you can do. You just have to suck it up, ditch the way-cool ending, and move on.  That'd kill it for me.

I'd have to write the whole thing out, then release it. And if I did that, if it's good enough to let people read, I might as well try to sell it.

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Author Craft / Re: Locked Within - My First Novel
« on: August 31, 2012, 12:22:59 PM »
Maybe Richard Dean Anderson?


Can't wait to read it. :) Sounds right up my alley! Huge congrats.

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Author Craft / Re: Reliable Website for witchcraft research?
« on: February 28, 2012, 03:19:40 PM »
I'm not sure what you're looking for exactly, there being about as many forms of "witchcraft" as there are people, but Cat Yronwode has one of the best/most accessible resources for Hoodoo I've ever seen. You can find her book in web form on her web page at http://www.luckymojo.com/hoodoo.html Poking around the rest of the luckymojo site will net you some great info, too.

Contrary to Charmed, most witches I know don't go in for potions. Herblore, yes, but you'll find lots of that in Hoodoo, too.  Medicinal teas, yes, or baths maybe. But not potions you drink (and certainly not throw) to create a desired outcome.

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Author Craft / Re: Disabled main carictors?
« on: February 06, 2012, 05:18:26 PM »
They were a little, but I get it. I wouldn't be surprised if you've gotten odd looks for wanting to write, with your difficulties. But hell, Helen Keller managed and she was blind. Stephen Hawking's almost completely paralyzed and he manages to write books just fine.

I'm glad to hear you're learning how to beat your problems into submission.  ;) 

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Author Craft / Re: Disabled main carictors?
« on: February 06, 2012, 04:40:32 PM »
I don't really mind that you don't spell as well as I do.  I don't sing as well as Christina Aguilera. It's just a thing. People are different.

What bothers me is the harsh reality check you're in for when you find out that neither agents, editors, nor readers will cut you any slack for your disabilities.  Their only concern is, "I can't read this."  It's not their job to work with your disability, it's your job as a writer to minimize the impact it has on your writing.

On board posts? Whatever. Y'know, it's no big thing.  I sometimes am not in the mood to try and translate your posts but so what? No big deal.  But if you want to be a writer, this IS something you're going to have to address and you haven't said word one about what you do to try and address it.  Do you use a spell checker in your writing?  Do your first readers fix your spelling for you? 

It does no good to get defensive with us when we're not being offensive. We're not attacking you for your spelling, just wondering what, as a writer, you're doing to address this difficulty.

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Author Craft / Question for outliners...
« on: February 03, 2012, 04:38:58 PM »
I never outline. Well, almost never. Halfway through a story I might jot down some thoughts on where it could go, or if I get in a tangle I'll think out loud on paper. But now I have these ideas for this epic fantasy I've been wanting to write.  I'm outlining mostly as a way of getting the ideas down so I don't forget them. I'm kind of enjoying this spate of pre-writing. I'm writing sloppy paragraphs like this (none of this is actually in my outline):

Jill goes to well, finds bucket outside on the ground. Problem, she worries about it. Finds bucket dented, smear of blood. Worries Jack's in well, but no sign of him.  Turns to look at distant hill; did he go without her? Turns to go, sees wolf tracks, assumes wolf has Jack. Remembers wolf vowing revenge for 3 pigs incident.  Knows she'll need help. She'll have to go to the woodsman. Afraid of him, poss. former relationship? Will ex help her rescue current boyfriend from big bad wolf?

The question is, how do you know when your outline is enough to fill a book vs. too much for one book? Can you judge book length by your outline?

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Author Craft / Re: Tools for Writers
« on: February 02, 2012, 09:17:20 PM »
Hand-writing's fine, if you don't mind typing it up later. You wouldn't be the only writer to do things that way.  But seriously, you need a spell-checker. Badly. Very, very badly. Even if you're severely dyslexic (one of my last bosses was, to the point of illiteracy) there are software programs that will help figure out what you're trying to say, or you can use Dragon to dictate to. It'll get some words wrong, but far fewer than you have wrong in just that small post.

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Author Craft / Re: Are Readers Growing Tired of New Urban Fantasy?
« on: January 31, 2012, 06:53:28 PM »
I'm liking Control Point so far, but I admit, I went sort of unamused when the book said "Women are usually healers..."

I've stayed unamused.

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Author Craft / Re: Are Readers Growing Tired of New Urban Fantasy?
« on: January 31, 2012, 03:51:47 PM »
"Then TDF came along..."  When TDF came along, Urban Fantasy had already been cranking for a few years, and "Storm Front" was published twelve years ago.

Twelve years.

Guilty Pleasures, the first Anita Blake book, was published in 1993 and I feel comfortable saying this book started the UF craze. It was not, to forestall the 'But what about _____' posts, the first UF book by any means, but I think it was the series that launched it into the public eye.  (I've been reading UF since the 80s when Mercedes Lackey published her Diana Tregarde novels, for instance.)

This is not "newness", not even to a geezer like you.

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Author Craft / Re: Are Readers Growing Tired of New Urban Fantasy?
« on: January 31, 2012, 02:36:47 PM »
Sadly, I know I am.  There are rare exceptions, but for the most part I'm over the genre and don't read it anymore.  I'm craving good epic fantasy.  And I'm half-heartedly shopping around a UF book myself.

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