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Author Craft / Re: opinion wanted
« on: January 10, 2015, 10:16:56 AM »
Well yes, that's rather obviously saying that the adult does not think that Santa exists, and even more, actively tries to get children to believe otherwise. But then again, if it later is confirmed that the witch and faerie do indeed exist, the child might also apply that to the case of Santa, but that is not a given, and until that time, the child might be rather distraught with it all. You might want to muddle it a bit more.

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Author Craft / Re: opinion wanted
« on: January 09, 2015, 10:14:07 PM »
I guess it depends on how heavily it is hinted on. Would a kid get from the sentence that Santa isn't real, or would it be something that is obvious in hindsight, once the kid knows Santa isn't real. It also depends on how unique it is, can't your replace with it with a similar remark that conveys the same?

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Author Craft / Re: World building: my strength and my weakness.
« on: December 29, 2014, 11:04:57 AM »
Pcpoet: That seems like a good strategy. I'll keep it in mind for when I get stuck again.

Griffyn612: Indeed, history text-books are rarely the most interesting reads. It seems like a good building plan to me, and I will try to use it. I'm now working on shorts mostly, and trying to weave the world directly into the story. I'll PM you if I work up a real background piece, which most likely would be used as reference piece by me.

Farmerbob1: I'll try the reading out loud once I get back home (staying at the family for the holidays) or when I'm alone. Always makes me feel weird when I start reading out loud with other people nearby.
I am indeed trying to work the background into the story, but I got to watch out for making it a big info-dump. I always find that immersion breaking, unless it's done really well. One example of it done badly is CSI, I always think 'Wow, you guys must be really incompetent if the tools of your trade need to be explained every single time.' I understand the why, the viewers need to know what's going on, but to me that's not the right way. Now, to find a better way, that's the trick.

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Author Craft / World building: my strength and my weakness.
« on: December 28, 2014, 11:07:03 AM »
Let's cut right to the chase, to keep you guys from needlessly toiling through fields of text:

I always get stuck at the world-building part, be it urban fantasy, swords & horses fantasy or sci-fi. It's the thing about writing that I do best, the individual story lines, not so much. My question is, how can I resolve this issue? And now, for the fields of text.

Once, I had written about 100 pages, but 75% of that was background and appendix type of material, just 25% actual characters and story development, something that normally is the meat of a book. Then, I normally get stuck on that part and get frustrated, ending with me not writing for a while, losing the feel for the story and tossing it all away.

In my opinion there are two possible solutions to this problem. The first being that I negate the problem completely and find a co-writer who is tasked with the majority of the non-world-building, while I do the world-building. The upsides of this are that it is most likely easier for me, and that you write more when there are two of you, as general rule of thumb. The downsides are that you have to find someone and, more importantly, that writing is a hobby, not my job. I study Medicine, and that will take priority. As a result, I might not have enough time to put into it to satisfy my co-writer, and thus drag their productivity down. That wouldn't sit well with me.
The second solution is that I work on my weakness. This would probably be harder to do, but would make me beholden only to myself. It would probably involve short stories.

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Author Craft / Re: Science-Fiction: How 'real' must a technology be?
« on: June 11, 2013, 06:20:05 PM »
Thanks for all the replies, and I'm trying to go for hard science fiction, but since the only science I'm good at is biology, and not physics or mathematics, it will probably end up softer than what I had set out for. But there's no harm in trying.

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Author Craft / Science-Fiction: How 'real' must a technology be?
« on: June 11, 2013, 12:30:08 PM »
Hello guys, here I am again. This time the question is: 'How 'real' must a technology be?'
Because for the last few days I have been thinking up and discarding various ways for instant (FTL) communication between two points, ranging from quantum entanglement to small traversable wormholes, reading up on them and concluding that they were all impossible. Right now I devised my own way of making things possible, by thinking up a completely new way of going about it. So that issue is no more, but I fear that due to my need to get things right I will encounter similar things later on. So, should I keep trying new things if old things turn out to be impossible, or should I just flip off quantum physics and go my own way?

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: June 05, 2013, 03:11:12 PM »
It seems that I need to tell something about myself here, well, here we go.

I have always liked stories, whether I told them to myself when I got bored, or if I read the books containing them. Although I started out as a slow reader, and people even thought that I might had to be transferred to a special school, I quickly picked up the pace during the Christmas vacation during third grade (the Dutch version of third grade anyway, which takes place at the age of 7-8, during which we learn to read, write and do basic sums). By the time I celebrated my 11th year of life, I had read almost all the books that interested me of the Childs section of the library, and I snuck into the adults section. The cause of that tour into the lower floors was mainly caused by the fact that the series of books I was reading at the moment started in the Childs section, but ended in the adults section (it was the Belgariad, if anyone wanted to know). Apparently they thought I was getting books for my parents, and kept thinking that for about a year, after which they told me and my parents that I wasn't allowed back there anymore. This caused me to go back to the Childs section and broaden my taste, previously confined to Sci-Fi and fantasy, with Detective, Thriller and Ghost stories. Four years later, when I turned 16, I was allowed back into the adults section, which was about the same time as when I switched from reading the translated versions of the books, to the native English versions of it, which I found more enjoyable, mainly because for unknown reasons, translators switch between different translations of the same group between books, which annoys me.

About the making of stories myself, the stories I started with, which were either Sci-Fi or Fantasy, always had the major flaw of the main characters becoming practically invincible and therefore, boring. This is because I always like the idea of absorbing power of your fallen enemies, surroundings, artifacts, etc., this by means of incorporating tech or modules in Sci-Fi stories, or just absorbing powers and energy through rituals or parasitic powers for Fantasy. I am now trying to limit that kind of power. I have tried writing stories, mainly your typical sword and magic fantasy, on and off for a couple of years now. I always got stuck on certain points, being able to envision events and conversations in the future, but not being able to figure out how to get there. This caused me to go do some other things for a time, and after a while I would come back and find the story to be too childish or just plain bad, and I started again with a different idea. And again. Again. And again again. Now I decided to write the background and the world first, before I try to power to the block that stops me.

As it is now, for my personal situation, I am waiting for the results of both my final exams for the high school (VWO+ (Technasium), for the Dutch readers of this forum) and the results of the admission test for Medical school at the Radboud University in Nijmegen. With a little bit of luck, I will get allowed and then I will move to Nijmegen, trying to make a living on my own.

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Author Craft / Re: Publishing online or not?
« on: June 05, 2013, 09:04:54 AM »
It all sounds interesting and thanks for the information. I've got a big vacation coming up, during which I will be in Italy with the family, so I will have time to write. I'm probably going to first set up the world, probably in a manner similar to yours, Aminar, when that's done, I will either post a link to it somewhere and let you guys loose on it, if you want, or maybe I will try to fill it up with my own stories.

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Author Craft / Re: Publishing online or not?
« on: June 04, 2013, 08:46:20 PM »
You're probably right about me being off about publishing, I honestly don't know that much about it.

And how would that story making for RPG's exactly work? Should I post it somewhere in one big, sort of organized heap?

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Author Craft / Publishing online or not?
« on: June 04, 2013, 07:52:00 PM »
I have always liked to imagine worlds, be they Sci-Fi or fantasy, filled with stories. Lately, I have been trying to get those words on paper. As it turns out, I'm not good at writing big story-lines. I like to write about the back stories of things, the extra info on tools used, the discovery of technological, medical and/or magical advances, the creation of the world where the stories take place, and this is exactly what I did whenever I got stuck on the main story, to the point where the background was bigger than the main story. I simply like crafting worlds. Sadly, all this background info isn't really good material for being published in book form.

This gave me the following idea; 'What if I published all this on a website, with a tab for general world info, a tab about items, a tab about the rules, a tab with the personal stories? Would that work?' Upon browsing this forum, I read that anything published online, cannot be published in books as well. This makes sense, who would pay for something free, but since a big part of the stories about the world would be online, wouldn't that mean that everything else would also be unpublishable? Aside from all that, I'm also about to head off to the university, doing Medical (if I get accepted, but I have good hopes for it), so money won't exactly available in great amounts. I know that webhosting can be very cheap, a handful of Euros a month (I am Dutch), but I am still hesitant. Can you guys/girls help me out a bit?

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