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Author Craft / Re: Opinions and help with my magic system
« on: November 29, 2011, 05:50:56 AM »
The reason for the Fountain of Youth bit is that my MC needed a way to stay live long enough to train a child of prophecy to be the Relic Master. I do agree that the bottling of the water from the fountain does need to have some type of cost and that the potency of it vanishes after only a few years if it is not drunk within that amount of time. My MC is also a person who sometimes forgets important details about things and one of those things is where in his bag he left his bottles of fountain water which is another side effect of the water. Another thing I should mention is that my MC does have a wand that he uses but that is only used as a channel for his magic even though it does have magical properties of its own.

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Author Craft / Re: Opinions and help with my magic system
« on: November 28, 2011, 05:40:33 AM »
Thank you all for the suggestions. There is one important piece of information that I left out. One of the main characters of my book series is over 800 years old.

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Author Craft / Re: Opinions and help with my magic system
« on: November 25, 2011, 05:29:06 AM »
First off thank you for raising these questions. I hadn't really asked myself any of these yet. To answer your first question the lifespan of the castor just shortens. The castor is then able to gain some of their time back through various processes. One of these processes is drinking from the fountain of youth. Though yes the fountain does make you younger in most stories one of my characters is from Avalon, alternate plain of existence in my stories, and the fountain has this adverse effect. Have yet to think of why the magic shortens the castor's lifespan though.

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Author Craft / Opinions and help with my magic system
« on: November 24, 2011, 03:34:19 PM »
I am writing a book and need help with my magic system. The best that I can come up with is that magic costs time. What I mean by this is that if you use magic it will take off a certain amount of time off of your lifeline. That is why after you use a large spell it weakens you, because it takes time for your lifeline to adjust to losing time. That is also why my main characters know where the Fountain of Youth is.

Any help with filling in any details would be helpful.

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: November 14, 2011, 04:57:02 PM »
I need some help. I can't figure out how to make a system of how magic works in my books. My characters wield wands but I only want to use those as a focus for directing their magic. Any help would be awesome thanks.

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