I just recently re-read the books. Looking at the map in FLF, makes me wonder a bit about the events of CuF. Did Jim just forget about Forcia? Tavi mentioned that the Canim sacked both Parcia and Rhodes, yet Forcia is closer to the Canim. Furthermore, two of Kalare's legions held the Blackhills to prevent a response from Parcia and the eastern legions. Forcia was in an ideal position behind all of Kalare's legions. They could of easily went on the offensive and taken the city in both CuF and CaF.

Wow the shield wall covers a lot of real estate.

Its stated that if Ceres was defeated Kalare could attack Alera Imperia directly. Aquitaine at the moment is between Ceres and Alera Imperia.

I believe Forcia and Rhodes should be switched around. Rhodes is relatively close to Kalare and both use southern slave labour. Plus it was stated in Cursors Fury that the Canim have sacked both the city of Rhodes and Parcia numerous times. Rhodes looks to far for the Canim to travel that long just to attack. Rhodes should be closer to the bloodlands and it should be on the coast

I also think that Alera Imperia should be between Aquitaine and Ceres. If the capital is where it is right now than Kalare would have to face Aquitaines legions as well as the Gaius'

As for Parcia didnt Tavi travel from Parcia to the capital in CaF? Thats a long trek from Elinarch to Parcia methinks.

But otherwise I think your doing a great job.