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DFRPG / Re: Promotional Web Graphics
« on: February 09, 2011, 09:01:13 PM »
Great! Thanks! Just starting this with my group, was going to keep a running blog on the process (because everyone likes reading about a new GM and her group, right? Shhh, give me this).  Needed a good graphic to tag the entries with!

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Author Craft / Re: Beta readers?
« on: January 18, 2011, 02:59:34 AM »
I usually ask close friends whom I usually trade books with.  I know they have a similar aesthetic, are essentially my target audience, and I email the current draft to them with instructions to take a hatchet to it if necessary.  If you're very specific with what you want, that helps.  I have one friend that I tell to ignore the spelling and grammatical mistakes, and to alert me to odd jumps in plot where they feel jerked around too much, to discrepancies in minute details (names, places, colors, etc), and to overall feeling:  Did this answer your questions about x?  Was that how you expected the situation to resolve?  Did anything seem out of character with what you've read so far? Etc.

I have another friend who is my grammar man.  He corrects spelling and flags jumpy and choppy language.

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Author Craft / Re: Dialog help...
« on: January 18, 2011, 02:48:58 AM »
If you write it in the language you're comfortable with, you'll get the idea out and find the perfect words for it later. (I know how hard that is.  Trust me.  I have to scroll to the bottom of my document every time I open it to keep from going back and nitpicking over my own writing.  I had to set up deadlines and then my boyfriend had to threaten to lick my eyeball to get me to keep to the deadlines and not keep revising - because, really, who wants their eyeball licked, am I right?)

Another alternative is to take a break and hit the library, or alternatively, Netflix.  I'm writing a story set sort of in the same time era as you mentioned, and I find Charles Dickens to be very helpful in getting my diction in the right frame of reference.  There are things that might be off here and there, but a good few read-throughs by people you trust will alert you to anything that sounds too false.  Reading/watching an adaptation (most particularly reading) will immerse you in that time frame.

For instance, have you read Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell by Susanna Clarke?  Aside from being a gobsmackingly good read, Clarke writes it as thought it had been written during the Napoleonic Wars, so it gives that weight of historic accuracy to it and grounds the fantasy plot within real events and authentic language.  Alternatively, Naomi Novik's His Majesty's Dragon series is far more modern in its language and plot structure, but the historic details (even when they deviate from true history) are so sharp and precise that it gives the same weight to the story, just at a different angle.  Either book feels like an alternative slice of that era of history, but use different tools to accomplish it.

So it depends on what you're trying to achieve, really.  Do you want it to feel like a book that could have been written back then, and later "found" by you?  Or do you want it to be more cinematic in scope, modern in its faster paced plot and witty dialogue? There's lots of different ways to go about it, so you have a lot of wiggle room.

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Author Craft / Re: I need more music.
« on: January 18, 2011, 02:35:58 AM »
God bless Pandora radio.  Have you tried creating a station?  It doesn't do so well with score composers, though I have a combination going of Yann Tiersen, Philip Glass, and Yo-Yo Ma that's not half bad.  If you do it by band - or better yet, by song - it really shines.  I use different stations depending on which story I'm working on at the moment.

If I'm working on something more of a fantasy bent, I'm a big fan of film scores.  Right now I've got the scores to Stardust, The Pillars of the Earth, The Tudors in a playlist, and a YouTube window open (because I can't find the cd anywhere) with the theme to the old Merlin miniseries (the one with Sam Neill).

If I'm working on something more modern, I've been rather obsessed with Mumford & Sons and Florence and the Machine lately.

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