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Also, "The Vampire Lestat" includes Armand and his group of flunkies being held at bay when Lestat enters a church.  Armand knows that he can enter with no ill effects, but the others don't come inside for fear of their (un)lives.  Not quite the same as magic affecting them, but still a similar concept.

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Also, read I Am Legend - a good deal better than the movie, in my opinion.  The vampires there were repelled by crosses only when they were Christians in life; whereas Jewish vampires were repelled by Stars of David, and if they had no faith you were stuck with staking them to death and other such violent things.  Kind of an interesting 50's-era rendition of vampires, and the author got into some science-type reasons for vampire behavior and traits.  Short but sweet.

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Author Craft / Re: Authors and Procrastination
« on: May 19, 2009, 09:53:46 AM »
Oooooooh, yeah.  The internet is my playground.  I ride the bus to work every morning and type on my blackberry, so that's when the work gets done, but for editing and getting an overall feel...well, I'm working on book 2 when I still have 28 chapters of editing, not to mention a second round of editing after that, and designing a cover (photography, 3D modeling programs, photoshop, etc.) that needs to be done.

And instead of getting going on that I'm reading forums.  D'oh!

At least I have a rough draft done?

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Author Craft / Re: "Paper, Plastic or ...Zombie Mojo??"
« on: May 19, 2009, 09:48:53 AM »
Yeah, some interesting concepts in there, but some of it might need to be fleshed out a little.

Some of the changes in the character reactions were a bit too quick ("No I don't!"  Looks guilty.  "So you drugged me?" - maybe these two should be spaced out a little more?).

Also, there were maybe a few too many characters introduced, kinda clouded things up a little.  It is a short story so a lot has to be jammed in, but I think a little more development is in order.

Altogether, good though - original concept!

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Wow.  I really like your system.  Very unique in the applications and limitations.  You can do a lot with that.

Question, though - you said maybe stronger spirits would have a harder time staying over, but in another post nature spirits and other very strong ones would be almost native to our realm.  Should something be reconciled there?  Like maybe the spirit made a pact with the land itself in order to stay?  That way it would be region specific and would account for different cultures and their different mythologies.  Just a thought.

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