I'm working on my story skeleton as demonstrated on Jim's blog.  This is what I've got.  Does it look like I'm doing this right?

When a terrorist seeks a deadly magical artifact, former Paranormal-Ops agent, Craig Lockman, must keep the artifact from discovery while protecting the daughter he never knew he had.  But will he succeed when pitted against a traitorous ally and a vengeful extremist determined to unleash an army of dead souls on U.S. soil?