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McAnally's (The Community Pub) => Author Craft => Topic started by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:18:30 AM

Title: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:18:30 AM

Updating story. New plot, characters, etc. >_> Deal with it 8D

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Shecky on October 25, 2007, 02:27:39 AM

How about Gowan Commando? ;D Sorry, just playing. :)

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:29:39 AM

XDDDD I would do that XD I'm working on a first chapterish type story and I'll hopefully post it soon so people can flame me for sucking at writing 8D

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:33:02 AM

Ok, I cant remember how to spell a word. I think it's embezzle or something like that. Like stealing money from a company. Anyone know how to spell it?

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Shecky on October 25, 2007, 02:49:40 AM

You spelled it correctly. Noun form is embezzlement.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:51:37 AM

Good. XD I suck at spelling some words.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:36:45 PM

Posted first chapter. Please note that it is only a first chapter and also note that I will have to revise it alot. It's only a rough draft.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Shecky on October 25, 2007, 02:42:55 PM

squeeled squealed

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:48:53 PM

Sorry, Im not using microsoft word (Im isntalling it now though 8D)

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 02:56:10 PM

This is gonna be kind of tough for me. I'm only in English 3. But I'm reading an English 9 book to see if it helps any.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 25, 2007, 03:33:23 PM

I slightly revised the first chapter. I think it sounds better that way, but that's just me. Please tell me what you think.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on October 26, 2007, 11:25:41 PM

Chapter two up.

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: SunPhoenix on November 04, 2007, 06:46:55 AM

Hm since this thread is that of a story. The question I have here could benefit you and me. Those chapters are approximately the length of my chapters. Is that a good length for a chapter when its been reformatted for a book?

Title: Re: Working progress
Post by: Ursiel on November 06, 2007, 03:07:21 AM

I doubt it. I'm going to have to read through the chapters and open up a can of filler paragraphs to make it longer and more interesting 8D