My name is Philliph Province
I have been working on my book for four months now, i'm 15 years old, and i have 36 pages of material(10 font Arial Text, single spaced with one collective inch taken off of the sides to be a close fit for an actual book's size.) I don't exactly know the mechanics of writing yet, but i think i am developing a collaboration of other authors styles to make my own. If anyone here is a published author, please contact me because (I believe) I am in need of critiquing, as nobody that i know is knowledgable enough to give me the kind that I need. I only have 3 1/2 chapters completed, with the Prologue and Chapter 1 revised to hell. I'm just not very confident in my ability to write yet, and this is the first thing i have actually tried doing except for the necessities in English class.
But now, a little about my character. His name is Ranulf Iriquois Tesven and his father was a commander of the 3rd division of the Pantinimian Army. Ranulf, though, is a 15 year old(go figure) that is on his way to an adolescent training camp in Roth Duren to the west of his home town Reor Fliyon. If this had a timeframe in relativity to the history of the civilizations of humans, i would say just around the enlightenment period, when people were just begining to get an understanding of the world but were still waging war with eachother as if it were a hobby.
In this book, everyone can use the elements to their advantages. Everyone. The elements are: Earth, Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning, Energy, and Time.
Earth, energy, and time are unique.
-Earth. Those who posses this element can harness every ability(except for time, energy, and lightning) and use it to a small degree(only the masters). Their control over the ground and anything that directly comes from it is supreme.
-Energy. It is what flows throughout everyone. It's power is derived from lightning, but those who posess the ability of the control over lightning cannot use it. Energy users(the masters) can use lightning and do things the lightnig users cannot with it. The actual description of it and its uses are far too long for me to post here.
-Time. Can change the functionalty of your brain and body. Time is relative and is based on perception. Change the way you percieve it, and it seems to change itself. the users-which are very few in number, even by the standars of total population-can speed up, slow, and stop time.
The other elements are as you would expect them.
You can also use(these are not elements)
(learned)
Magic (spoken)
Magic (Hand and thought)
Alchemi
Alchemy
Sorcery
Necromancy
(innate, but not elements)
Light
Mind Breaking
and maybe more...i might have already overdone it.
But, if you want to read the prologue and the first chapter, and i sorely hope you do, message me on this accout giving me your email addess, and i will personally email it to you.
Thanks
