Mira: Perhaps my word choices were poor. I didn't mean to imply anything nefarious. Everyone one here is pretty nice. I'm enjoying the opportunity to discuss DF.
I too went back reread Christmas eve shortly after the sample chapters started being posted. I'm concerned about her lack of mention and Thomas's lack of mention. I like them both.
Most likely it was me miss understanding, if you mean the Christmas Eve story was messing with us? I don't think so, it is a real subtle piece of writing, overtly we have Harry struggling to put together a bike for Maggie. That makes me laugh because a child's bike shouldn't be that hard to assemble, usually they can be purchased already put together, or the bike shop will do it. It is something any parent can identify with, the dreaded, "some assembly required" on the box.
From there though it gets strange, we find out that Christmas Eve takes place after the next two books, there is going to be a lot of blood, guts, and death.. There is the usual Harry guilt over such things whether he could have prevented it or not. But here is where it gets subtle, there is an air of grieving about Harry, he doing Christmas for his little girl but he is in lots of pain. Not just for the thousands in my opinion but for someone very close who he has lost. The big three are, Eb,Thomas, and Murphy, going by the trailer for Peace Talks, one or all three could very well not survive.. What confirms he is grieving a personal loss to me is how Kringle, a Christmas memory of his father, Molly's gentle sisterly kiss, and Mab, Mab of all people consulting Sarissa about a Christmas gift for Harry, even if it was to his daughter.. No, nothing overtly said that one of the three are dead, but at the same time you know one of them is. Yet, the whole story is sweet and kind of cheery, Maggie gets to meet Santa!