Paranet Papers and it's clever marginalia (SPOILERS for Day One short story!)

[thorr-kan]

Marginalia between Will and Butters on page 208 of Paranet Papers.  They're discussing an NPC named Saul.  Butter's says he'd work as a quest-giver.  Will asks if he has a big exclamation point over his head.  Murphy gets snarky.

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Waldo gets his first mission as a Knight of the Cross.  How does he receive the Call?  Big, yellow exclamation point over the head of his target.

I *love* these margin notes!

ETA:

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And it's a nice followup to Butter's "When I get a lightsaber." line at the Better Future Society dojo.  Foreshadowing!  It's seasoning for a series.

[jeditigger]

Thank you. We had fun writing them.