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Offline Ursiel

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Working progress
« on: October 25, 2007, 02:18:30 AM »
Updating story. New plot, characters, etc. >_> Deal with it 8D
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2007, 02:27:39 AM »
How about Gowan Commando? ;D Sorry, just playing. :)
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2007, 02:29:39 AM »
XDDDD I would do that XD I'm working on a first chapterish type story and I'll hopefully post it soon so people can flame me for sucking at writing 8D
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2007, 02:33:02 AM »
Ok, I cant remember how to spell a word. I think it's embezzle or something like that. Like stealing money from a company. Anyone know how to spell it?
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #4 on: October 25, 2007, 02:49:40 AM »
You spelled it correctly. Noun form is embezzlement.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #5 on: October 25, 2007, 02:51:37 AM »
Good. XD I suck at spelling some words.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #6 on: October 25, 2007, 02:36:45 PM »
Posted first chapter. Please note that it is only a first chapter and also note that I will have to revise it alot. It's only a rough draft.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #7 on: October 25, 2007, 02:42:55 PM »
squeeled squealed
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #8 on: October 25, 2007, 02:48:53 PM »
Sorry, Im not using microsoft word (Im isntalling it now though 8D)
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #9 on: October 25, 2007, 02:56:10 PM »
This is gonna be kind of tough for me. I'm only in English 3. But I'm reading an English 9 book to see if it helps any.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #10 on: October 25, 2007, 03:33:23 PM »
I slightly revised the first chapter. I think it sounds better that way, but that's just me. Please tell me what you think.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #11 on: October 26, 2007, 11:25:41 PM »
Chapter two up.
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #12 on: November 04, 2007, 06:46:55 AM »
Hm since this thread is that of a story. The question I have here could benefit you and me. Those chapters are approximately the length of my chapters. Is that a good length for a chapter when its been reformatted for a book?
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Re: Working progress
« Reply #13 on: November 06, 2007, 03:07:21 AM »
I doubt it. I'm going to have to read through the chapters and open up a can of filler paragraphs to make it longer and more interesting 8D
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