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Offline pcpoet

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looking for coments on story change
« on: July 25, 2015, 05:00:57 PM »
I removed this all because it was breaking the boards' policy about no posting storyideas....sory every on
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Re: looking for coments on story change
« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2015, 05:04:31 PM »
Consider sourcing it somewhere in the Pacific Theater?  Imperial Japan was no picnic, and that's a side of the war that is often ignored outside of Pearl Harbor and the Bombs
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Re: looking for coments on story change
« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2015, 09:27:45 AM »
I do not know how old you are, or if the story is still taught in schools.

I really suggest you read the Diary of Anne Frank before you continue, if you have not already.

Edited out a bit of this comment, based on forum rules.
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Re: looking for coments on story change
« Reply #3 on: July 26, 2015, 12:49:36 PM »
I removed my posts because I just realized I wasb breaking the rule of not posting your story sorry everyone......I am just excited about my project
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