I'm reading Girl on a Wire, where the main character is very reluctant to believe in magic. In the book I wrote this aspect is fairly similar, but reading it in a different story I wonder.
While reading a book I'm able to suspend my belief, especially in magic, easily, and think that when the main character is too reluctant to believe in the magic that is clearly happening that it starts to take away from the story.
I'm hoping to get your views and perhaps examples of when it worked and when it was too much.