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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #105 on: May 04, 2014, 11:50:33 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #106 on: May 05, 2014, 06:54:25 PM »
chapter one fixed plot wise
grammar spelling nazi needs to attack it for me but *shrugs*

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #108 on: May 07, 2014, 05:40:11 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #110 on: May 08, 2014, 06:36:56 PM »
My 70,000 word rough draft is going to be 80,000. That much more to edit later, but I continue to plow through. Enjoying it greatly, which with a first draft is kinda fun.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #111 on: May 09, 2014, 03:23:22 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #113 on: May 12, 2014, 10:49:46 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #114 on: May 12, 2014, 06:28:24 PM »
yep, definitely 80000 to finish. Muse also insists that the ending be written backassward. That has never happened to be before, but--hey, it's good stuff. (What back assward isn't a word? huh? :-)  )
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #115 on: May 12, 2014, 10:20:29 PM »
Editing.  Forever editing.  But Valorous Daughter is pretty much ready to go, just waiting for the cover art.  Been doing clean ups and revisions of the actual novel, A Kiss for Damocles, and I've expanded a few scenes.  That counts as writing, doesn't it?  Please... someone tell me that counts...

(Yeah, I'm going crazy wanting to start the next book, but I gotta get this one out the door first or I'll never, ever quite editing.)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #116 on: May 13, 2014, 06:40:05 AM »
It counts PG.
But one step at a time.
Get the first one done and then do the second one.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #119 on: May 17, 2014, 04:37:40 AM »
And edit, edit, edit. And research, research, research. And crank it out. It'll be another locked in weekend.

Anyone else add word count when editing? Love it. Love the depth. Love returning to the beginning now that I know the characters and where the plot threads will be going. BUT still cranking out those ending scenes of the rough draft. I think I'm up 2500 in the past couple days.
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