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Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« on: January 30, 2014, 07:40:43 PM »
Part 3 of "Celebrate the pages you've written.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2014, 08:42:55 PM »
probably won't have anything to post here until tomorrow, i just wanted to say I like your title.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2014, 11:48:05 PM »
For some reason the thread was locked before I could up in the (55k - Falon II) for yesterday!

Plus, what's up with the new name PG?!

I'll post again later today after I've got some words pounded out.  This sequel won't write itself.



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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2014, 12:22:24 AM »
Quote from: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 30, 2014, 08:42:55 PM
probably won't have anything to post here until tomorrow, i just wanted to say I like your title.

All part of the service!  :)
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2014, 12:23:37 AM »
Quote from: The Deposed King on January 30, 2014, 11:48:05 PM
For some reason the thread was locked before I could up in the (55k - Falon II) for yesterday!

Plus, what's up with the new name PG?!

I'll post again later today after I've got some words pounded out.  This sequel won't write itself.



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Had an attack of Dread Whimsy.  It's all the editing.  Makes my thinking parts gooey.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2014, 12:28:45 AM »
Quote from: Paynesgrey on January 31, 2014, 12:23:37 AM
Had an attack of Dread Whimsy.  It's all the editing.  Makes my thinking parts gooey.


You have to be careful Paynesgrey because you know what they say about editing don't you?!

Editing Rots your Brain!!!  Beware the creativity killer~





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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2014, 01:51:07 AM »
No choice though...  A lot of unnecessary and redundant exposition in that first chapter... gotta dig the polish out of the turd.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2014, 01:56:17 AM »
Quote from: Paynesgrey on January 31, 2014, 01:51:07 AM
No choice though...  A lot of unnecessary and redundant exposition in that first chapter... gotta dig the polish out of the turd.

Gonna put a nice stain brown sheen on it huh?




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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2014, 02:03:11 AM »
It will gleam the purest gold, like Mark Twain's tears.

The part of the draft is stuff I wrote over 100,000 words ago... I'm spotting a good many flaws and problems I didn't realize were flaws and problems at the time.  Tense, telling, and some chunks of exposition that can be cut entirely.  It's coming together though.  Kind of like returning to a model kit you gave up on as a kid.  Suddenly how to do it right makes sense.  :)

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2014, 10:55:12 AM »
56k - Falon II




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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #10 on: February 01, 2014, 09:58:16 AM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2014, 12:48:39 AM »
Finished editing what there is of volume #3 and gave it 600 more words of connective tissue.
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #12 on: February 04, 2014, 11:12:46 AM »
58k - Falon II

After and extended absense from writing I gave myself a good swift kick in the rear and started writing again!  The Conquest of Europe by Poland just isn't on par with writing (Europa Universalise) or so I'm telling myself  :o

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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
« Reply #13 on: February 05, 2014, 01:09:48 PM »
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Re: Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
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