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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #15 on: September 11, 2007, 05:49:43 PM »
This fits in nicely with how Alera came about...because Jim believed a good story could be written by a good author on *anything*. (The bet was to combine lost roman legions with pokeman)

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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #16 on: September 11, 2007, 10:55:04 PM »
Cie and I write quite a bit of our stuff in first person. I find it really increases both the depth of the character and the reader's investment in the mystery/adventure of the book. When the main character doesn't know what happens behind the closed door, neither does the reader, so finding out is all that more important. The trick is getting the character (and the reader) the information so it's believable. That takes practice.  But most all of the authors I like write in first person, too.
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #17 on: December 03, 2007, 09:16:52 PM »
Is there a work of High Fantasy that works in the first person?
Robin Hobb?  I know some people don't like her books, but I think they count as first person High Fantasy.
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #18 on: December 04, 2007, 10:47:09 PM »
The Charles deLint novels I've read were in first person.  I don't know if urban fantasy counts, but it worked for me.  He just changed the POV when necessary, but it was all first person.
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #19 on: December 06, 2007, 02:06:54 PM »
PLEASE tell me you're joking.  :o

Seconded.  *Baffled*
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #20 on: December 06, 2007, 03:45:17 PM »
Seconded.  *Baffled*

Since posting that, I've learned that it was, indeed, the case. Someone was asserting that good writing is entirely dependent on a good subject, while Jim was responding that a competent writer could take ANY subject, no matter how inane or silly, and turn it into good writing. The person pooh-poohed Jim's position, and Jim finally said something along the lines of, "FINE. I'll show you. In fact, I'll take TWO bad subjects and make something good from 'em TOGETHER." Those two subjects were chosen, yada yada yada, and now we have book 4 of the Codex.
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #21 on: December 06, 2007, 07:37:27 PM »
Another fun series that is FPV is the MYTH series - written by Robert Asprin.
This is a Fantasy/Humor epic series. Puns are around, but not like Piers Anthony or Terry Prachet.

Skeeve was created as the flip-side of all those Conan Stories - where instead of the Barbarian tearing down the (Evil) Mage's Tower of Power,
it is the “Sorcerer's Apprentice” (Disney Pun intended) taking on the World.

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Now, Asprin also evolves the series and shows the FP Viewpoints of the other Characters that have interacted with Skeeve over the years.

Skeeve FPV books are still “Myth”-titled, where others are “M.Y.T.H. ”-titled.
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Next – the series evolves again – when Robert L. Asprin teams up with Jody Lynn Nye and they create the next books:
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #22 on: December 09, 2007, 08:38:26 AM »
PLEASE tell me you're joking.  :o

Nope, that's the truth. Jim shared that story without going into detail way before the Codex Alera sold.  ;D

Just think about it. Fury = Pokemon. Lost Roman legion = Romanic technology. It's like the Roman legion took a wrong turn, went through a portal, ended up in Witchworld and developed fury handling talents.
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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #23 on: December 09, 2007, 02:02:00 PM »
Nope, that's the truth. Jim shared that story without going into detail way before the Codex Alera sold.  ;D

Just think about it. Fury = Pokemon. Lost Roman legion = Romanic technology. It's like the Roman legion took a wrong turn, went through a portal, ended up in Witchworld and developed fury handling talents.

Psst - lookie here:

Since posting that, I've learned that it was, indeed, the case. Someone was asserting that good writing is entirely dependent on a good subject, while Jim was responding that a competent writer could take ANY subject, no matter how inane or silly, and turn it into good writing. The person pooh-poohed Jim's position, and Jim finally said something along the lines of, "FINE. I'll show you. In fact, I'll take TWO bad subjects and make something good from 'em TOGETHER." Those two subjects were chosen, yada yada yada, and now we have book 4 of the Codex.

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Re: First person fantasy. Can it work?
« Reply #24 on: December 09, 2007, 02:13:09 PM »
Psst - lookie here:

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Nae being cheeky, Mr Shecky.   :D
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« Reply #25 on: December 09, 2007, 02:14:55 PM »
Nae being cheeky, Mr Shecky.   :D

Och aye.  ::)
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