Hi i am new and an aspiring author

[jeno]

Oh, I was thinking that your brain corrected the wrong word so you don't notice it's wrong. I do that with verbs. Usually I don't notice wrong verb tenses because my mind corrects the tense before it can register on my consciousness.

Same with me. It gets annoying at times. 

[cenwolfgirl]

Same with me. It gets annoying at times. 

i bet it dose sound quite annoying

(ps thanks for the correct spelling of annoying that is helpful )

[JassTheGhost]

My bad. Sorry....

[cenwolfgirl]

no problem
most people round here don't make the mestake as the word girl i in my username 
might be a clue
i don't know 

[jeno]

i bet it dose sound quite annoying

(ps thanks for the correct spelling of annoying that is helpful )

lol, you're welcome. 

[cenwolfgirl]

 
it was rely annoying that i could not spell the word annoying
as i say things are annoying a lot of the time 

[JassTheGhost]

Didn't even register for me lol.

[jeno]

If you're not sure if a word is spelled correctly, just pop it into Google. Nine times out of ten it'll correct it for you.

[cenwolfgirl]

rely?
wow thank you
*mavels at the wonder witch is the internet*

[trboturtle]

Well, I come by my mispelling naturally -- I'm just a crappy speller....

Jass, welcome to this little group of writers we have hiding here. We're a friendly group, willing to help each other out. Out of respect for Jim, we don't post our writing here, but otherwise, we discuss just about everything involved with writing. Any question and someone will answer them....

Again Welcome!

Craig

[JassTheGhost]

thank you Craig good to be here Jim is one of my favorite aothurs so its nice to see he has loyal fans. Also fun side note in life your name is my middle name. weirdness abounds.
 

[LDWriter2]

If you're not sure if a word is spelled correctly, just pop it into Google. Nine times out of ten it'll correct it for you.

I have been known to do that few times. Especially if I am in a hurry and my browser's spell checker won't help.

[JassTheGhost]

So since we are here talking do any of you have any pointers for writing a completely emotionless sex scene?

[LDWriter2]

So since we are here talking do any of you have any pointers for writing a completely emotionless sex scene?

Depends on how graphic you want to get and why they are having sex. For pay, for the thrills, because they are told to.

No loving feelings for the other person, not even temporary feelings. They can kiss, get aroused and physically feel something but they go through the motions without emotions. Or?

[JassTheGhost]

  They are having sex so the main character can stop feeling anything, its his out in life it stops the pain. He feel nothing but it numbs him its like taking a hit of heroine for him.