Hey everyone. I just got Your Story and finished reading it (I'm sure I'll have to look through it again). I don't have any previous RPG gaming experience and was hoping to get your guys' opinions on my first character. Is he interesting? Is he fairly balanced? Did I screw anything up?
Character: Jackson Quinn
Template: Semi-Mortal
High Concept: Crusader with a Badge
Musts: High Conviction (+3 or higher)
Trouble: Secret Identities and a Double Life
Phase 1: Estranged but Loving Family
Phase 2: Faith in God, Not so much in Humanity
Phase 3: Trained by and Working for Uncle Sam
Phase 4: Experienced Vampire Hunter
Phase 5: God's got me Warming up in the Bullpen?
SKILLS
Superb: none
Great: Conviction, Alertness, Guns
Good: Fists, Investigation, Resources
Fair: Driving, Lore, Scholarship, Discipline
Average: Athletics, Stealth, Burglary, Empathy, Presence, Contacts
STUNTS/POWERS
-2 Atrophied Thaumaturgy (Ritual)
- Channel/Enchant (Spirit)
-2 Inhuman Strength
-2 Inhuman Speed
-1 Someone is Looking out For Me (+1 Physical stress, +1 Mild Consequence)
-1 Person of Conviction
-1 Government Resources (+1 Lore, Scholarship and Equipment [can be subject to compel, ie: requisition denied] Comparable to modern mortal law enforcement tools)
ENCHANTED ITEMS
Enchanted Lucky Jacket (+3 Armor, +4 with kevlar. Limited area covered.)
Jackson's Enchanted Mare's Leg (+1 Spirit added to standard attack. Can be fired normally. Can be loaded with special ammunition (ie: steel-jacked rounds, silver bullets, armor-piercing) if declared before the start of session)
2 Slots open for potions.
-9 Total refreshment adjustment
Physical OOO
Mental OOOO
Social OOO
Power Level: Submerged Skill Cap: Superb (+5)
Skill points spent: 35
Total Available: 35
Base Refresh: 10
Adjusted Refresh: 1