Sorry about the mistake, Alablast. I didn't mean to put this in the Bar.
On another note, I will admit to this thread being semi self-serving, as a couple of you have read a bit of the story I put up on Kindle and I want to hear some opinions.
However, I do mean it when I say I wish for others to discuss specifics of their own stories, as well. It's always good to get opinions from people who share at least some common interest with yourself,
even if they sometimes disagree.
All critiques are opinions and any author is free to disregard any opinion at any time