Tony Stark writeup

[Belial666]

NAME: Tony Stark
HIGH CONCEPT: Scientist in Power Armor
TROUBLE: Pride Goes Before Everything
ASPECTS:
Billionnaire Businessman;
Weapons Expert;
Too Smart For My Own Good;

SKILLS:
+6 Weapons, Technology*
+5 Contacts, Resources
+4 Presence, Craftmanship
+3 Endurance, Conviction,
+2 Driving, Athletics, Survival
+1 Discipline, Rapport, Empathy
_{*replaces Lore for supertech}


STRESS: P: OOOO(OOOO) (armor 4)/  M: OOO S: OOOO
CONSEQUENCES: Mild, Moderate, Severe, Extreme

STUNTS:
Billionnaire: +2 to resources rolls if you take 1 time increment longer than normal for a transaction (to arrange/liquidate external assets)
POWERS:
Supertech Engineer: as per ritual crafting, use "technology" skill instead of Lore.
Supertech Refinement 7x
Iron-Man Armor [-3]
It is what it is: extremely heavy palladium alloy armor. Armor 4
One-time-Discount
Feeding Dependency: Radioactive Fuel
Inhuman Strength
Supernatural Toughness (catch: spiritual attacks)
Ion Thrusters: can fly as per flight, by taking -2 to dodge due to lowered maneuverability, it can keep up with aircraft.

LAB AND DEVICES:
Advanced tech workshop - +5 frequency, +5 power focus for crafting.
Supertech weaponry - power 11, frequency 6 attack gadgets (as per enchanted items) totaling 7 slots
Supertech shields - power 11, frequency 6 defense gadgets totaling 4 slots
Gadgeteer Inventions - power 11, frequency 6 onetime inventions (as per potions) totaling 5 slots


REFRESH/FATE POINTS: submerged+4 / 1
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[Ghsdkgb]

You have a Feeding dependency without a Hunger track...

[Mr. Death]

You know, when I saw Feeding Dependency for Tony Stark, a part of me was expecting the dependency to be for booze.

[Belial666]

It's for his armor - he always seems to run out of energy - and it should be based off the "technology" skill. I just forgot to write that down.

[Sanctaphrax]

I like it, this is more or less the way I would have written Stark up.

Though the armour seems underpriced.

[mithrandirthewhite]

Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.

[admiralducksauce]

Just wanted to say how much I like the "Too Smart For My Own Good" Aspect.  That's really well chosen.

[Sanctaphrax]

Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.

Where does it say that?

[mithrandirthewhite]

it doesnt state that, but i assume that would be a price due to magic's effect on modern tech.  Powered armour like iron man is considered modern tech.

[Ghsdkgb]

Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.

Should put that in as a Catch (+X) and add the value of the Catch to the price of the armor.

Keeps the same basic Refresh value, but fits the rules as written better.

[Mr. Death]

The armor itself seems underpriced because it doesn't appear to include any of the weapons the armor has.

[Belial666]

The armor is just that - the armor. Weapons, energy shields, gadgets; those are all additions via his supertech as enchanted items.

Hexing might work (though Iron Man's armor has never been shown to fail/malfunction naturally and seems able to even fix itself) but it might also be stopped by one of the energy shields before reaching any systems at all.

[TheMouse]

You know, when I saw Feeding Dependency for Tony Stark, a part of me was expecting the dependency to be for booze.

Booze and women. Preferably at the same time.

[Sanctaphrax]

it doesnt state that, but i assume that would be a price due to magic's effect on modern tech.  Powered armour like iron man is considered modern tech.

Is it?

Because I don't think that modern technology can do one tenth of what iron man does.

If something is supposed to be vulnerable in some way, then that should be an aspect or a part of its mechanics.

[synobal]

His craftsmanship should be a lot higher.