You might want to look at this.
I have seen that, and that would do exactly what my 2 refresh combo of
Holy Touch +
I Kill With My Heart does. I know it is probably not OP, but I am not sure if my GM will allow it, since it is clearly just better than the book version. I will talk to him.
If he says it is OK to take the improved Holy Touch I will need to come up with a different [-1] power to call
I Kill With My Heart, which may or may not end up attached to his IoP (I want the character to have all three parts of that motto as powers).
Looks reasonable to me. Does he get the standard +1 Athletics to his sprint rolls?
Yes, I intended him to get the +1 to all Athletics rolls from the Athletic Ability trapping (which would apply to sprinting), and just give up the extra +1 to Sprinting and the Stealth bonus in exchange for the Quick Hands trapping (which is essentially a Guns stunt, similar to a Quick Draw custom stunt I saw floating around here actually).
I was most worried that
I Shoot With My Mind could be a bit strong, since it gives two extra attack options and opens up the option of doing AoE (which is noticeably strong in this game). On the other hand, the Zone attack is basically exactly what Channeling would allow (without the benefit of getting to crazy weapon ratings and having focus items). And while the Spray attack aggregate bonus could be huge (+6 bonus in the case where he hits 6 targets), the Spray attack option is generally crappy, and getting the big bonus requires splitting your attacks so many ways that each individual one is fairly weak (though I can imagine the case where he shoots 3 Vampires at Great, Great and Good, each with Weapon 5 as being pretty good). I think [-2] is an appropriate costs for this sort of thing since it opens up whole extra avenues and comes close to playing with the action economy. Good to hear you think it is OK.
Ya I expected that Righteousness: Potent Prayer should stack with other bonuses in a nice way, but the rules are not clear on that.
Thanks for the feedback, it is very valuable as always.