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Offline SCARPA

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new authors website
« on: May 28, 2010, 01:21:31 PM »
Would love to get some input on the Authors website for my novel, Veil of the Dragon. (See below)
I posted it as I am finishing up the novel this summer. Basically ading some length to it to bring it closer to 400 pgs.
But I would greatly appreciate any insight ayone has on either the site or the work. The prologue is posted on it.
Thank you!

www.tombarczak.com

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Re: new authors website
« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2010, 02:45:56 PM »
Couple of comments:
1) get rid of the word homepage.  Take it out of the Header, and change it to the word Home on the button.
2) dark blue link colors on black background = can't read a damn thing.
3) frame up your prologue to be more 'center of page' and less wide.  Clean up the carriage returns.
4) as a corollary to #1, get rid of the name of the page you're on from the header.  Instead have the 'button' darkened depending on which page you're on.

5) Good luck!

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Re: new authors website
« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2010, 03:04:15 PM »
Thanks for the tips.
Unfortunately the dark letters are not my doing but stupid gamevance advertising.