Undertowners:
There's a new version of the SF writeup out on the MediaFire site. It's got some major additions / changes, so I'm especially keen to get y'all's input on it.
First, I've modified the last city theme/threat. It's been bothering me for some time now, because it overlapped too much (in my opinion) with one of the points of conflict while kind of ignoring the others. I've replaced it with a new threat (WITH FRIENDS LIKE THESE) that I believe better represents the points of conflict as a whole. Let me know what you think.
Second, I am giddy with delight to announce that all the locations are now in the writeup -- in their (hopefully) finished form. Again, please look them over and let me know if I've forgotten or otherwise missed anything.
Finally, I'll be adding in character descriptions in the coming week. Assuming no (further) changes, that should make the document ready for public consumption.
Looking forward to tonight!
Mij