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Terminalvelocityturkey
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Need a critique
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May 12, 2010, 04:50:16 PM »
I have this fan fic that has been brewing in my head for a few weeks now and after a couple scraps at the plotline I have written down most of the first chapter. I was wondering if anyone out there would be interested in reading through what I have done so far and giving me a constructive opinion on the flow and such. If interested please either send me a message on here or you can email me at w4c_99@hotmail.com Thanks guys!
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meg_evonne
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May 12, 2010, 06:59:41 PM »
I'm needing a break. I'll take a loook tonight if you like. Only time for a short fast read, if that's okay? check your e-mail..
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