well since the revision post was deleted, I decided to repost my story. thanks Mickey for telling me about a loop-hole in the rules.
it's a Sci-fiction novel. takes place in post apocalyptic future. the surface is completely desolate, and Covered in radiation. It follows a Merc who has been alive for more than 70 years, yet he doesn't age. I've revised it..twice...since i've started the project. I had up to 17 chapters done. but didn't like the way I went about it. I plan on having on sequel novel, and atleast one prequel novel. maybe another sequel novel taking place further into the future after this novel. I hope to have this published within the year.
Apollyon.critique is welcome. hope you enjoy.