Looking for opinions...

[DrDestiny]

Posted below are a bunch of links to a comic strip I've been playing around with, and posting on deviantArt. The purpose was really to see if my wobbly-lined style of illustration would 'fit' in a comic environment. Personally, I think the drawing is OK - going from a very stylised start to a more realistic look - but my narrative progression sucks.

I'm really posting here to garner opinions and suggestions. I have a very thick skin, so please, no pulled punches!

http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p1-97463938
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p2-97571369
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p3-97637095
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p4-97837499
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p5-97948648
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p6-98040415
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p7-98121923
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p8-98280684
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p9-98386846
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p10-98594055
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p11-98594195
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p12-98778259
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p13-99204317
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p14-99341805
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p15-99522211
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p16-99601526
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p17-99873641
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p18-99873797
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p19-100512024
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p20-100615386
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p21-100883427
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p22-100893396
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p23-100978348
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p24-101073455
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p25-101263555
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p26-101554678
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p27-101705325
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p28-101831079
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p29-102259136
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p30-103189209
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/doctor-destiny-origins-p31-103189278

http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-Pre-110930314

http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p01-113752685
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p02-114075434
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p03-114195833
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p04-114850467
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p05-115049997
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny-Trials-p06-115513803
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny-Trials-p07-118443807
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p08-118868844
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p09-119349562
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny2-Trials-p10-120755514
http://drdestiny.deviantart.com/art/DocDestiny-Trials-p11-123761023

[the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh]

You are aware there is a minor DC Universe supervillain called Doctor Destiny, yes ?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doctor_Destiny

[DrDestiny]

You are aware there is a minor DC Universe supervillain called Doctor Destiny, yes ?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doctor_Destiny

Yes, but only after having this fella (or one like him) as a RP characters for many years. It's a non-profit play around too, so I'm not too worried DC/Warner will come and kick me around.